My Current Story

Well I've been world building for the past two weeks. My writing teacher pointed out huge holes in my back story that I need to fix immediately. Not only that but characters and story lines that just didn't make any sense. You know how somethings seem like a good idea until they reach the paper. I have shored them up and gotten rid of a lot of it. Today I plan on putting my new and improved story on paper and resending the first chapter to my critique partners.